Présentation d'un objet en anglais

Perfcakes is a new and original product which can make perfect pancakes, well cooked, well round in a few minutes! It is possible to do 7 at a time! It is easy to use, pour the dough in the mold and that's it. Easy to wash, it goes into the dishwasher and it's clean. Perfcakes makes the size of a pot and it does not take space in the cupboard. It was conceived so that customers will not get burnt when using the product. And on top of that, it's not expensive.

The advert is effective because it gives a lot of details about the Perfcakes and explains well how to use it. It gives the price and suggests a time to order the product in order to get a better offer. It gives examples to use it. It explains well that the product is made for customers and that it is suitable for everyone. Its operation is very easy. The advert is shorter, and it allows all customers to understand it.

However, the advert doesn’t tell where customers can buy the Perfcakes. The format of the advert isn’t very adapted for this type of product because customers can’t imagine exactly what the product is. The campaign doesn’t give so much details about the design of the Perfcakes. For example, the ad could be made into a tv commercial to show the product as it is very eye-catching. And a catchy jingle could make the product even more attractive.

The campaign’s rate is a 7/10 because it can be understood by everyone and it’s short. The slogan is very persuasive and memorable. The advert invites the customer to get the Perfcakes. The offer encourages customers to buy the product in a short period of time. It illustrates the cooking possibilities that customers can do with Perfcakes.